Week 13 Story: The Seagull and the Ocean
One day in sunny California there was a seagull named Franklin.
Franklin was a newcomer to the sea. He had grownup on a lake his entire life
and had never seen a wave in his life. He was fascinated by these waves. He spent
his first week at the beach chasing the waves in and out. He learned from the
older seagulls one of the best methods for collecting food is gathering the
muscles that are standing as the water rushes back to the oceans line.
Franklin worked at this practice but just kept getting
annoyed at the thing he used to think was so fascinating. He would rush towards
the freshly turned up muscles and then get pushed away by the next wave that
was rushing in all too fast. So Franklin asked the ocean why he had to always
be pushing waves into the beach. The ocean responded abruptly and asked Franklin
why he should deprive the whole world from one of the greatest blessings in
nature just to gratify one single seagull. The ocean went into a long lecture
on why waves were one of the world’s greatest gifts.
The ocean told Franklin the things he is trying so
hard to get which are the muscles wouldn’t be washed up without the help of the
waves. There would be no big fish along the beachside without the help of the
waves. This is because the waves stir up the baitfish, and the baitfish are
what the bigger fish feed on. If there were no waves the tourists would not wan
to come to the beach because it would not be enjoyable to swim in as well no
one could surf.
Franklin realized his request and was ashamed of it. He
apologized to the ocean and to all of the sea creatures his request would have
affected. He then went back to his attempt of collecting muscles.
(Image is of a seagull by the ocean, Source: Seagull)
Author's Notes:
The original Myth and Folklore story I based
The Seagull and the Ocean off of was The
Owl and the Sun. In this section there was an owl that was looking at the
sun. While it was looking at the sun, it asked the sun why it had to be so
bright and had to stare right at the owl at that rate. The sun replied asking
if it thought it was reasonable the whole world should be deprived of the
greatest blessing in nature, to gratify the owl. And the plot that I acquired
from this story was that envy and detraction will have some onlookers that say
against it. Meaning that some peoples wants will have onlooker’s disapproval of
it.
The way I adapted this original story was
by changing the characters to the ocean and the seagull. Then I used the same
plot of the animal requesting to stop doing an act that would affect a lot of
other people. An then asking why the ocean should take away the greatest gift that
others enjoy, and this was similar to when the owl asked the sun to stop being
so bright at that rate.
Drew,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the lesson behind this story! After reading your author's note, I can tell just how creatively you wrote this. It was a fun and easy read the flowed really well. I think you picture accompanied everything well, I could picture the beachside while I was reading this. Great job!
Hello, Drew!
ReplyDeleteLet me start off by saying that I really appreciate the fact that you named the seagull Franklin. I can understand Franklin’s frustration when the waves push you away while you are trying to collect something! For me, it was a beautiful sea shell! I am glad that the ocean was kind enough to teach him a lesson!
You wrote a fantastic story! Keep up the good work!