Week 9 Reading: Mans Best Friend Betrayal
There once
was a middle-aged archery hunter named Scott. He and his wife Amy lived in Utah
where they raised there very trustworthy Nova Scotia Duck Tolling retriever
named Bell. Scott’s best friend Jimmy was the owner of a bow shop called nocked
and ready. Scott and Jimmy would spend all their time together in that shop reminiscing
on old stories or at the range where it was a constant competition.
Scott
brought bell everywhere with him whether it be the archery shop or shooting. With
this Jimmy had grown very close to bell as well. Scott would go on very long
hunts sometimes for a week or two weeks and needed someone to watch over bell
when he was gone and when Amy was at work. So Jimmy being the good friend he
was would just bring bell to his shop to hang out. During this time bell grew
very close to jimmy and without Scott even noticing bell started to favor
jimmy. Scott did not notice this until he came home from a hunt and Bell would
not greet him and only stayed by Jimmy’s side. Scott did not care about this at first until
it started to become annoying and Bell would not even listen to him.
Scott was
very sad about his dog growing closer to his friend, eventually bell would not
even come home. Scott confronted jimmy and demanded he give bell back. Jimmy said
no and said that bell was the one deciding to stay with Jimmy. Scott was mad
and sad but told Scott straight up that he would regret this for a very long
time. At the moment Jimmy did not know what this meant but a couple moths later
started to figure out what he meant. Bell was very prone to sickness and seemed
to always be in the vet. Jimmy did not have as high of a paying job and Scott
did so these bills started racking up. From this jimmy went under and had debt
start piling up from his beloved friend bell. For the rest of his life he
wished he would have never betrayed his best friend Scott and would have just
kept Bell as his friends dog.
The Story
that this is based off of is The Fish and the Leopard’sWife. This was a very interesting story where the main theme I
got from it was do not betray those who are close to you, because they will not
directly hurt you but will make you pay for a long time. In the story the
leopard was friends with the fish. But the leopard would often time go out of
town. Whenever the leopard was gone the fish would go make love with his wife.
The leopard came home early one trip and found this. He did not want to deal
with the fish directly, so he asked King Eyo to deal with it. The king made it
so that fish could only live in the water and if they left the water they would
die, as well on top if a fish was caught it was always eaten. This story was
interesting in that the entire fish community had to pay for the wrong doing of
the one fish. I tied this story to the story I created above by carrying
along the theme of betraying someone close to you will bite you in the butt for
a long time to come later on in life.
(Image is of a Nova Scotia Duck Tolling Retriever, Source: Duck Toller)
Hi Drew,
ReplyDeleteI appreciated how you changed the story from the original. I think the dog choosing her owner's friend is still a big betrayal. If they were truly friends, I wonder why the owner's friend decided to keep the dog. This definitely did get him back though with the bills which was sad to read about. I have had a dog with medical issues, and there was a lot of sadness and financial burden brought about by this. I hope Bell eventually got better.
Hi Drew,
ReplyDeletePoor Scott it's so sad that he lost his dog. I think your story did a good job of relaying the original myth's theme of betrayal. Reading your author's note I was intrigued since I did not read the original story. It kind of made me laugh to think of a fish sleeping with a leopard's wife. I would just say to keep an eye on your proper nouns, sometimes you forgot to capitalize Bell.
Drew,
ReplyDeleteI read the original story before, and I absolutely love how you retold it! I wasn't even aware which story you based it off of until I read your author's note. I think changing the characters to humans and a doggo made it hit home with a lot more people. It was interesting how you changed the "betraying" character from the friend (Jimmy) to the wife character from the original story (doggo). It was hard for the reader to blame either of them, but the lesson hit home just the same. Great job!
Hey Drew!
ReplyDeleteThis modernization of an folktale is certainly interesting, and builds up to a unique conclusion. One thing that made it hard to follow was the rather inconsistent capitalization of names/words in the story - it was kind of hard to tell what was and wasn't a name at times. That could be something to keep in mind for future writing.
Hey Drew!
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you modernized this story and also utilized the changing of the character forms was really great because I think it made it more relatable! The inconsistent capitalization is the only glaring thing I noticed, but overall, I really enjoyed the story and the source story! Really great work, Drew!