Week 8 comments and feedback


I believe that the comment portion of this class is very useful wen thinking of future story topics. It allows you to see how other students interpret your story and how you might change them accordingly. The comments I have received have been very useful when editing my stories and portfolio. I believe the comments I have been leaving on my peer’s pages are very beneficial to their story’s improvement. I do believe this is giving me some connection to my peers in this class. I might be a little more critical on my future comments. but that is just a thought.


(I thought this picture was very funny, Source: Cats)

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